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Where does this lead?

April17

What is this? Where does it lead? What happens? Write a description of what happens next.

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It’s a Mystery by Bailey

March28

Ali stood silently, looking at the door.With a slow creaking sound, it opened. Taking a deep breath, Ali walked inside… The arched door creaked as Ali tentatively took the smallest step he could, however it turned out to be the biggest as he left one world and entered another. Colossal plants arched for miles giving […]

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It’s a Mystery by Bradley

March27

Once inside it took Ali a few minutes for her eyes to adjust but she coudn’t see anything.Silence spread all around the room as a cold breeze hit her . Fear spread through her body. As a scent drifted up her nose,it was the smell of a damp musty corridor leading from the room . […]

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It’s a Mystery

March27

Class 6 have writen some short paragraphs about what happens when a strange door is opened. Here are some examples.    

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